Sela Locke

C H A P T E R S I X “That’s great, honey. I just - I don’t have time for…” The woman who strode into view stopped abruptly, staring ...

Don't worry, she isn't escaping this time. Bad for Aslina - good for you. And then Jason and Yel come back in... I guess it would be the next chapter... ...

They searched the trees that surrounded them, but there was no one to be found. For a moment, all was quiet, and the smell of alive, fresh things seemed to ...

The dream Aslina had as she floated through her light-headed unconsciousness was one she’d had many times before. It always seemed to end the same way, but for some reason, ...

C H A P T E R T H R E E For a few moments all Aslina did was lie still, the chirping of the crickets and the rustlings ...

C H A P T E R T W O “Lins, wake up! C’mon Lins, c’mon!” Tina’s anxious voice broke the darkness, and Aslina shot up, hurrying to reassure the ...

Love it, love it, LOVE IT. Nothing I noticed that could be criticized - really, nothing. Des is so... like.... someone. Maybe a mix of me, Monica, and... Bub? No, ...

Wow Nu, you actually took a turn being the nitpicker. It becomes you nicely. xD I will fix dese things soon, but in the meantime, put up more 'Ever Happily'!!! ...

Thanks! I really like Steph Meyer, too! I owe you a review. I'll try to get around to it sometime soon. 0_0;

Mmhhm. Once again, I am reminded vividly of a small Mexican boy. Well, maybe not small. But still. NOW. I can't critique anything, really. But I WILL suggest that you... ...

Don't worry Nans. The similar character thing is going to work out nicely. However, I will put in more description, and add the next chapter. :D

Thanks so much! ^^ Reviews are so friendly. xD No, since the door was open, when he slapped her, she stumbled back into the hut, but they could both still ...

Well then! -Tries not to explode with a feeling of accomplishment- Stop stroking my ego. It makes me feel too... cool. Although I'm sure Rick doesn't mind that you think ...

Gosh, thanks! And yes, I'm working on a prologue thing. ^^

The 'only' is a purposeful repetition, but I might fix it. Other than that, I'll get going! (sometime. X_X) Oh, and Keyli is not in a good place to show ...